advice from today's critics on refining our presentations

make sure your point is clear, and that everything in your presentation relates to/supports it

keep moving forwards with each page: don't get stuck in just one place

think about your audience: remember that they haven't seen the entire process -- they aren't familiar with what we're doing

MODELS:
use the different media to focus the discussion,
make sure the models support your argument and are actually related to what you're saying
think about operational models: showing the relationship between the parts of your project
think about models as installations, toys, games, animations, etc